Blog Post #4: Rhetorical Situation for Asghar

Context & Exigence

The video was taken in Ted and was published on YouTube in 2015. The video is responding to self-identity which many Americans perhaps have problems with. 

Author

Fatimah Asghar is a poet, performer, artist, photographer 

Text:

Audience:

The audience is YouTube viewers, anyone who watches Ted Talks, poets, 

Purpose:

Fatimah struggles to find her identity growing up. She wants people to open themselves like a book so that they can feel comfortable. You shouldn’t look at people in a 1 dimensional way like she stated so that you don’t view people as the same as others. Take the time to be less judgmental about meeting someone who has a lot of background identity.

Argument

What does it mean to be an American? she asked.

Evidence

Asghar’s personal experience was coming from a family of immigrants but being born in America. She was criticized by other people saying that you’re not American enough in school and that she was not Pakistani enough from her family. 4:20- 4:50

Rhetorical Strategies

At the beginning of the video, I thought Asghar was going nuts when she was yelling born here. Then I realized not only is she giving a monologue but she’s giving a poem. At times it sounds like I’m saying it out loud but I’m using it to hear a poem in my head. 

Citation:

Blog #3: Rhetorical Situation Worksheet for June Jordan

Context & Exigence:

When this text was written in 1985 many things were going on like terrorism, police brutality, and racial inequality. 

Text:

This text was published in “On Call: Political Essays by June Jordan ( Boston: South End Press, 1985).  

Author:

June Jordan is a Jamaican- American writer, poet, playwright, essayist, and political activist.

Audience:

Wille Jordan’s family, Africans American, the court, and the police department are responsible for the death of her student’s brother, at the state university of New York.

Purpose:

The author wants to educate AAVE to other students that can be black Americans, those who are interested, and the people who think AAVE is incorrect when it has its own set of rules.

Wille’s brother had suffered police brutality from racial inequality which ended up in his death. Wille shared his experience with June and she tried to convey to us readers and to people that she was protesting about black English.

Argument:

AAVE is not wrong English. You speak for yourself about what your identity is.

Evidence:

“There are three qualities of Black English- the presence of life, voice, and clarity”. (Jordan 6). This shows that AAVE is not so bad after all, you are still communicating in English but just in another dialect. 

Rhetorical Strategies:

I like how there are certain rules for the use of AAVE. It’s hard to follow but I never knew there was such a rule therefore it can be used as English.

Citation:

“June Jordan.” Poetry Foundation, Poetry Foundation, www.poetryfoundation.org/poets/june-jordan.

Blog #2 Rhetorical Situation Worksheet & 1 Page response to Tan

Rhetorical Situation Worksheet:

Context & Exigence:

Tan believes she got her voice from her mother’s but also felt embarrassed, and ashamed, because of her mother’s English when she was young. But as Tan grow as a person, in literacy and literature she began to feel some sorrow and regret feeling negative about her mother’s English, and fully embrace her to the point where she sometimes sounds just like her mother tongue.

Author:

Amy Tan is an American author who received her B.A with a double major in English and linguistics also with an M.A. in Linguistics.

Text:

Mother Tongue was published in 1990 by a literary magazine called “The Threepenny Review.

Audience:

Amy Tan’s mother is the intended audience as well as Chinese people who live in America.\

Purpose:

The author is trying to convince others that she is a writer and not a scholar of English or literature. She gave an amazing story about her journey in her literature so that we can understand the struggle she faced for not having a good resource to learn English from her mother. But instead of putting the blame and being ashamed of her mother’s English, she accepts her at all costs.

Argument:

Tan believes that her mother’s English is not “broken”, she does not like that phrase.

Evidence:

“It has always bothered me that I can think of no way to describe it other than broken as if it were damaged…(Tan 2). The whole idea of saying someone’s English is “broken” seems to break people like one person would assume you are not intelligent therefore you won’t be treated as an equal. People have a tendency to be judgmental but try to find respect in someone else English so that they don’t feel included in society.

Citation:

“Take Online Courses. Earn College Credit. Research Schools, Degrees & Careers.” Study.com, homework.study.com/explanation/when-was-mother-tongue-by-amy-tan-published.html#:~:text=Mother%20Tongue%2C%20by%20Amy%20Tan,and%20based%20in%20Berkeley%2C%20California

Amy Tan Official Website.” Amy Tan, www.amytan.net/. 

Rhetorical Strategies:

The part where she states “I am not a scholar of English or literature.” Right off the bat, she tells us she can straight up give her personal opinions, which makes her reading so much easier to read and by that I mean she does not sound like a robot when I read, other times when I do read the authors sound alike.

1 Page response to Tan:

Feeling connected to Amy Tan fills up a void of comfort when it comes down to using the English language. The reason for this is simple, despite having different ethnic backgrounds, we have something in common which is the struggle of literature at a young age. For example, in elementary school, I was the best student in math class, like the teacher made me teach my classmates no joke but when it comes down to any, I mean any writing assignment, gosh I would fall behind my classmates. One of the lines Mother’s tongue states “Math is precise; there is only one correct answer. Whereas, for me at least, the answer on English tests were always a judgment call, a matter of opinion and personal experience.”(Tan 3). This line touches me as far as even remembering my past experience. There is something about finding one answer, one solution but that all changes when it comes down to literature. You can express any given word yet I’m not creative enough to find an image. But as time progresses I grow more into respecting literature yet I’m not at the mastery level. If only I can find a way to reach that level I would be satisfied.